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Spelling can be corrected,by what you have,a gift for word play and picture making is something not all of us can do,in a word,this page is one of the finest written I've seen in a while!Especially the first page.It sets the tone and the interest in,what ever is going to follow!I'd keep up with this one,Cookie!So far,it's agreat read!TL