THIS IS MY COLLEGE ESSAY, IS IT READY TO BE SENT TO COLLEGES?

This is an innapropriate topic for a college essay. You do not talk about the prospect of college nor do you mention your bad sat scores/ gpa. You sound obnoxious and this essay does not reflect well on you. This essay also does not say anything about you specifically. If you need to explain your bad grades do so on the additonal information section of the common app not on you essay. You need to throw out this essay and begin again. Perhaps talk about a sport you have done or something else you are pionate about. Good luck.